Audience Feedback

When presenting our pitch we got the following feedback from our audience: 

Positives-

• Locations appeal
• Like the artistic elements 
• Autumnal theme links with lyrics
• The idea of editing on the beat

Negatives/improvements-

• Could be too girly and not appeal to males
• Possibly include too many random shots
• Not a strong narrative 

Our pitch is a very important aspect of research as our media class includes our target audience which is teenagers aged 14-18 and it is vital to get honest feedback in order to improve our idea and make sure it appeals to a wide audience. For example the male audience said it doesn't appeal to them as it could be quite girly but said they would be more likely to watch if it included the male gaze. It is also important as it allows us enough time to go back and reevaluate our narrative before we begin filming to make sure it's gripping to an audience.