In todays lesson we got our media class to watch our video so far as we are very close to finishing, so wanted feedback on how we could improve what we have so far in order to create a higher quality product. They all agreed that the continuity of the black and white is aesthetically pleasing and links in well with our indie/alternative genre as well as the flow of the shots as they are all in order and the locations transition well.
Video of some of the feedback:
However, when shown to our audience and as highlighted below they agreed that it doesn't make sense that it switches from the protagonist wearing a coat to not and then back again, but we adapted our idea and thought it would make more sense to have the video showing a passing of time of her reminiscing rather than it being set in one day. As well as this they said that some of the clips lag a little.
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